Jumat, 11 Maret 2016

INSULINE MAN

Created by
Muhardi Saputra
Hajar Mar'atussolikah

There is a story about ordinary human who become special human . how can it happen ?
Once upon a time, there two people life together without no parents and another family but they had much legacy. The young brother’s name is Berk and another one is Erol . Erol is 24 years old he have good memory, IQ 156,and good looking. He is a doctor specialized in cardiovascular department. He is kind person, humble and polite. his brother Berk is 22 years old. he is a scientist, he spend his life much more in laboratory . he has high intelligent, anxiously with everything but fortunately he is rich so he can create everything that he want. they are perfect brothers many people said that. Now Erol work in his hospital and Berk a scientist for the company .    
One day Erol was diagnosed with endocrinology disorder, he got diabetes mellitus type 1. This disease is idiopathic it means he got it since birth. explanation of this disease is he had abnormal pancreas, so this organ can’t produce insulin for the body. The function of insulin is to make blood glucose in normal level , when people with dm type 1 the insulin is less so it make people in dangerous because the hight blood glucose can resulting heart disorder, nefropathy disorder, eye disorder and death. this make Erol so upset because he know after he diagnosed wih this he need long treatment and he must injected with insulin pen during his life. Another problem is come in, Erol have allergic with protein of animal and he is vegetarian too, so he can’t use general insulin pen. He tells Berk to make special insulin pen for him. Berk accepted his request to make that. 
  
One day in hospital after Erol had lunch, he didn’t release that his insulin pen is empty and he haven’t the back up. he feel dizzy because his blood glucose is high. he had a surgery, so he called Berk to make the insulin pen quickly and bring to the hospital . Berk is intelligent but  he have weaknness, he can’t panic. When he panic, he can’t focus with what he do. He did one mistake when he made formula for the insulin pen and he didn’t release it. Berk arrived in hospital and injecting his brother quickly.  After 5 minute Erol feel more comfortable and run faster to the surgery room. When Erol in surgery room he feels strange, his vision feel more incisive than before, he feels his body stronger than before . when he will cleave thorax’s patient usually Erol need much energy and pressure to open the thorax but Erol feels the opposite he feels already touch but the thorax opened easily. after his surgery he call his brother and tells what happen with his body, but Berk was laughing, he said it just his suggestion because Erol already in hiperglikemia. Erol agree with Berk opinion and he didn’t thinking too much again.
And then Erol hurry up to emergency room because have a call that will arriving a patient with suspicious thorax injury. When a patient is coming Erol immediately examination this patient he ask to the ambulance worker what going on with this patient,  he got the information that this patient was try to stealing a motorcycle and be arrested by some soldier. He fall from a motorcycle. After he heard that information . Erol asked nurse to bring this patient to X-ray room. When in way to X-ray room this patient try wake up and run out from hospital . Erol hear that report immediately to pursued this patient .
When he pursued this patient he doesn’t look the traffic light was red . Erol was attacked by truck rapidly . everyone who see this collision get shocked , the truck bring water galoon was rolled back and Erol tossed aside road . Erol think he had died , he open his eyes and release he still live and didn’t hurt. He looked back and shock because the truck shattered. He run to the cabin he saw a  passenger had minor injuries.
Erol very confused about this incident, and then he tried runing, and amazing Erol run very fast and catch the thieve. Berk called erol, he said that he did not deliberately wrong to give insulin pen to erol but Erol said thanks because he can do amazing thing today. He says to Berk that make the insulin even more because he wants to be a super hero like in the movie.


To be continue

3 komentar:

  1. Good idea... When i red it, it's like marvel's superhero. I like it. I'm currious about the next plot.. And waiting for it. :)

    BalasHapus
  2. The idea is great, but you could reduce the use of medical terms. I am sure they are as important as the background story of the main character. But it has the downside. It makes you look eager in proving that such medical condition is not fictional, and at the same time you rush with the plot and forget that readers should enjoy the plot too.

    Try read some sci-fi stories as references.

    BalasHapus
  3. I love your idea! Insuline Man!!! OMG! Hahahaha. Keep writing!

    BalasHapus