Jumat, 11 Maret 2016

 Chapapa and The Golden Island

 Created by
Dwi Wening Anggarini | 20140310099
Jati Wido Retno            | 20140310119

Today is a great day over the sea, after sail around the world Chapapa a “bootani” sailor finally found an island. It was a desolate island and no one there.
 “ Wow, the sands are so white, Said Chapapa
 He droped the anchor and walked around the beach and then he steped into the forest looked forward for an interest plant. Chapapa love plants very much, he sailed around the world to find some new species of a plant. He walked for six hour but he got nothing, he just walked and looked around for something special, a species that he never saw before.
Oh this is my six precious hours” said Chapapa
Chapapa keep walked forward, and from another side he saw a big red fruit. Chapapa was very surprised and ran for it.  “ Oh god I cant believe it, this is Gomu fruit” Chapapa said. Gomu fruit is a special fruit that have a magic power, people who eat gomu fruit will be have elastic power. They can be like rubber. They didn’t need a stair for catch up a fruit in the high tree because they can elongate their hands like a rubber.
Unfortunately, Chapapa fell down from the tree when he was picked up Gomu fruit. Chapapa fell down into a huge hole and he got consciousness.
After an hour Chapapa woke up and he touched his head that still dizzy. Chapapa opened his eyes, then he cried. “ A golden city! It’s not just a dream and fairy tale!” said Chapapa with a wet cheek.
He looked around and cant believe that, he was in a golden city that dissapeared after hundred years ago. Chapapa walked around and found everything was gold and shiny, the building, a basket, and he found a very big bell made by gold in the center of city.
Chapapa was very happy, he took some of golds and gomu fruit and back to the boat. On the boat, he drew a map of the island and how to got there.
Chapapa back to his village four month later, and he reported his journey to the king. The king was very interested with a golden island. A year later with a big ship and good preparation, Chapapa and 200 royal troops started their expedition to the Golden Island.
But, after sailed in four months and went there, Chapapa dan royal troops didn’t find the Golden Island. Chapapa was very sad and dissapointed and decided to go back into the Kingdom.


In the Kingdom,
“Chapapa, why are you lied to me ??” said the king
Pordon me my lord, I was very honored you” said Chapapa
So where is the golden island? You are a liar !!“ shouted the king
I;m sorry my lord, there is something wrong but I don’t know what is it, we had been followed the right direction, but the island is GONE” Chapapa cried.
And then, the King called for his warriors to did execution in the middle of the town to punished Chapapa
Oh no please, give me a chance, one more chance my lord. I beg you. I promise I will find and fix the problem. We will find the golden island soon, my lord we will find the golden Island, trust meeeee “ cried Chapapa
But the king didnt pay attention what Chapapa tried to explain.
The next day, when Chapapa will got execution. The middle of the town really crowded because of too many people from the town wanted to saw Chapapa execution.
 In the end of his breathe, Chapapa still wanted to explain that Golden Island was exist. No one believed what Chapapa’s said. Then, all the people in the town didn’t believe Chapapa and his family. What a poor Chapapa.




5 komentar:

  1. At first, the story reminds to Alice's Adventure in Wonderland or the Great Wizard of Oz. I would say, it has the potential to be a cute story for children.

    Then, it did a sudden turn of event. The main character was executed. All I can say was: wait, what just happened here?!

    BalasHapus
  2. A good story with a cute imagination about a place. For a childrens it will be something interesting when they read it. I think you must continue the story and dont forget to give a good massage for the reader.

    BalasHapus
  3. Gomu fruit! It reminds me of One Piece! Hahaha. And Chapapa, what a cute name!

    Actually, I love this kind of plot twist. I recently went to Universal Studio Japan and tried Attack on Titan 4-D ride. It was...awesome and scary at the same time (if you read or watch Attack on Titan, you will know what I mean. Hahaha. I don't read and watch it, btw). And somehow, when I read the ending of your story, it reminds me of Attack on Titan: it's fun and...scary. Hahaha. Make it longer, make it longer! *fangirling mode: on*

    BalasHapus
  4. its a good story with amazing imagination ...

    BalasHapus
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    BalasHapus