INSULINE
MAN
Created by
Muhardi Saputra
Hajar Mar'atussolikah
Hajar Mar'atussolikah
There is a story about ordinary human
who become special human . how can it happen ?
Once
upon a time, there two people life together without no parents and another
family but they had
much legacy. The
young brother’s
name is Berk and another one is Erol . Erol is 24 years old he have good
memory, IQ 156,and
good looking. He is a doctor specialized in cardiovascular department. He is kind person, humble and polite. his brother Berk is
22 years old. he is a
scientist,
he spend his life much more in laboratory . he has high intelligent, anxiously with
everything but
fortunately he is
rich so he can create everything that he want. they are perfect brothers many
people said that. Now Erol work in his hospital and Berk a scientist for the company .
One
day Erol was diagnosed with endocrinology disorder, he got diabetes mellitus type 1. This disease is idiopathic
it means he got it since birth. explanation of this disease is he had abnormal pancreas, so this organ can’t
produce insulin for the body. The
function of insulin is to make blood
glucose in normal level , when people with dm type 1 the insulin is less
so it make people in dangerous because
the hight blood glucose can resulting heart disorder, nefropathy disorder, eye
disorder and
death. this make Erol
so upset because he know after he diagnosed
wih this he need long treatment and
he must injected with insulin pen during his life. Another problem is come
in, Erol have allergic with protein of animal and he is vegetarian too, so he can’t use general
insulin pen. He tells Berk to make special insulin pen for him. Berk accepted
his request to make
that.
One
day in hospital after Erol
had lunch, he didn’t release that
his insulin pen is empty
and he haven’t the back up. he feel dizzy because his blood glucose is high. he
had a
surgery,
so he called
Berk to make the insulin pen quickly and bring to the hospital . Berk is intelligent but he have weaknness,
he can’t panic. When he panic, he can’t focus with
what he do. He
did one mistake when he made formula for the insulin pen and he didn’t release
it. Berk
arrived in hospital and injecting his brother quickly. After 5 minute Erol feel more
comfortable and run faster to the surgery room. When Erol
in surgery room he feels
strange, his vision feel more incisive
than before, he feels
his body stronger
than before . when he will cleave thorax’s patient usually Erol need much
energy and pressure to open the thorax but Erol feels the opposite he feels already touch but the
thorax opened easily.
after his surgery
he call his brother and tells what happen with his body, but Berk was laughing, he said it just his
suggestion because Erol
already in hiperglikemia. Erol agree with Berk
opinion and
he didn’t thinking too
much again.
And
then Erol hurry up to emergency room because have a call that will arriving a
patient with suspicious thorax injury. When a patient is coming Erol
immediately examination this patient he ask to the ambulance worker what going
on with
this patient, he got the information that
this patient was
try to stealing a motorcycle and be
arrested by some soldier. He fall from a
motorcycle. After
he heard that information . Erol asked nurse
to bring this patient to X-ray room. When
in way to X-ray room this patient try wake up and run out from hospital . Erol
hear that report immediately to pursued this patient .
When
he pursued this patient he doesn’t look the traffic light was red . Erol was attacked
by truck rapidly . everyone who see this collision get shocked , the truck
bring water galoon was rolled back and Erol tossed aside road . Erol think he had died , he open his eyes and release he still
live and didn’t hurt. He
looked
back and
shock because the truck shattered. He
run to the cabin he saw a passenger had minor injuries.
Erol
very confused about this incident, and then he tried runing, and amazing Erol
run very fast and catch the thieve. Berk called erol, he said that he did not
deliberately wrong to give insulin pen to erol but Erol said thanks because he
can do amazing thing today. He says to Berk that make the insulin even more
because he wants to be a super hero like in the movie.
To be continue
Good idea... When i red it, it's like marvel's superhero. I like it. I'm currious about the next plot.. And waiting for it. :)
BalasHapusThe idea is great, but you could reduce the use of medical terms. I am sure they are as important as the background story of the main character. But it has the downside. It makes you look eager in proving that such medical condition is not fictional, and at the same time you rush with the plot and forget that readers should enjoy the plot too.
BalasHapusTry read some sci-fi stories as references.
I love your idea! Insuline Man!!! OMG! Hahahaha. Keep writing!
BalasHapus