Chapapa and The Golden
Island
Created by
Dwi Wening Anggarini | 20140310099
Jati Wido Retno | 20140310119
Today is a great day over the sea, after sail
around the world Chapapa a “bootani” sailor finally found an island. It was a
desolate island and no one there.
“ Wow,
the sands are so white”, Said Chapapa
He droped
the anchor and walked around the beach and then he steped into the forest looked forward for an
interest plant. Chapapa love plants very much, he sailed around the world to find some new species of a
plant. He walked for six hour but he
got nothing, he just walked
and looked around for something
special, a species that he
never saw before.
“Oh this is my six precious hours” said Chapapa
Chapapa
keep walked
forward, and from another side
he saw a big red fruit. Chapapa was very surprised and
ran for it. “ Oh god I cant believe it, this is Gomu
fruit” Chapapa said. Gomu
fruit is a special fruit that have a magic power, people who eat gomu
fruit will be have elastic power. They can be like
rubber. They didn’t need a stair for catch up a fruit in the high tree because
they can elongate their hands like a
rubber.
Unfortunately, Chapapa fell down from the tree when he was picked up
Gomu fruit. Chapapa fell down into a huge hole and he got consciousness.
After
an hour Chapapa woke up and he touched his
head
that still dizzy. Chapapa opened his eyes, then he cried. “ A golden city! It’s not just a dream and fairy tale!”
said Chapapa with a wet cheek.
He
looked around and can’t believe that, he was in a golden city that dissapeared after hundred
years ago. Chapapa walked around and found everything was gold
and shiny, the building, a basket, and he
found a very big bell made by gold in the center of city.
Chapapa
was very happy, he took some of golds and gomu fruit and back to the boat. On the boat, he drew a map of the island
and how to got
there.
Chapapa
back to his village four month later,
and he reported
his journey to the king. The king was very interested with a golden island. A
year later with a big ship and
good preparation,
Chapapa and 200 royal troops
started their expedition to
the Golden Island.
But, after sailed in four months and went there, Chapapa
dan royal troops didn’t find the Golden Island.
Chapapa was
very sad and dissapointed and decided to go back into the Kingdom.
In the Kingdom,
“Chapapa,
why are you lied to me ??” said the king
“Pordon me my lord, I was very honored you”
said Chapapa
“So where is the golden
island? You are a liar !!“ shouted the king
“I;m sorry my lord, there
is something wrong but I don’t know
what is it, we had
been followed
the right direction, but
the island is GONE” Chapapa cried.
And then, the King called for his warriors to did execution in the
middle of the town to punished Chapapa
“Oh no please, give me a
chance, one more chance my lord. I beg you. I promise I
will find and fix the problem. We
will find the golden island soon,
my lord we will find the golden Island, trust meeeee “ cried Chapapa
But
the king didn’t
pay attention what Chapapa tried to explain.
The
next day, when
Chapapa will
got execution. The
middle of the town really crowded because of too many people from the town
wanted to saw Chapapa execution.
In
the end of his breathe, Chapapa still wanted to explain that Golden Island was
exist. No one believed what Chapapa’s said. Then, all the people in the town
didn’t believe Chapapa and his family. What a poor Chapapa.
At first, the story reminds to Alice's Adventure in Wonderland or the Great Wizard of Oz. I would say, it has the potential to be a cute story for children.
BalasHapusThen, it did a sudden turn of event. The main character was executed. All I can say was: wait, what just happened here?!
A good story with a cute imagination about a place. For a childrens it will be something interesting when they read it. I think you must continue the story and dont forget to give a good massage for the reader.
BalasHapusGomu fruit! It reminds me of One Piece! Hahaha. And Chapapa, what a cute name!
BalasHapusActually, I love this kind of plot twist. I recently went to Universal Studio Japan and tried Attack on Titan 4-D ride. It was...awesome and scary at the same time (if you read or watch Attack on Titan, you will know what I mean. Hahaha. I don't read and watch it, btw). And somehow, when I read the ending of your story, it reminds me of Attack on Titan: it's fun and...scary. Hahaha. Make it longer, make it longer! *fangirling mode: on*
its a good story with amazing imagination ...
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